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Posted on: May 17, 2021

Author's Notes

It's really important to me that the dialogue in Mothorial flows as naturally as possible. This can be a challenge with space limitations, but it also presents a fun opportunity to learn how to balance effective dialogue with efficient storytelling. Some pages end up having as much as 25% to 30% of their dialogue cut and combined and tweaked to fit the space, then rewritten a third time to flow properly. Webcomics, amiright?

Transcript

AVA: ...Fine. I'll do it. But only 'cause you're a real friend.

AVA: I don't know what Vex told you, but-

RAIONA: We were hanging out in a red flower field.

RAIONA: Try checking there first.

RAIONA: I'll see you 'round.

RAIONA: ...Alright, I did it.

RAIONA: But I really don't feel good about this, guys.

CORI: She bought it, right?

RAIONA: Yeah, but-

CORI: It's just a prank, Rai.

CORI: That jerk needs to learn her lesson.

CORI: After this we'll leave her alone, okay?

RAIONA: Can't you let this go? It's not worth it.

VEX: Maybe not to you.


Volume: Volume 1
Characters: Ava, Vex, Coriander, Raiona

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