I'm putting the commas outside the quotations, screw MLA guidelines.
ACKERLEY: Two flasks of water. A satchel of snacks. One map of the local forest.
ACKERLEY: One pocket knife.
ACKERLEY: "The Cunning Eye of the Wild", "Teachings of the Jeanlean Scholars", "The Great Goose Detective".
ACKERLEY: One lute.
AVA: You do realize we're only going out for the day, right? All I brought was Wanda and my coat.
ACKERLEY: You can never be too careful. "Chance favors only—"
AVA: "—the prepared mind." I know. But three books?
ACKERLEY: Well, "a well read mind—"
AVA: "—is a prepared mind." Yeah. So why the satchel of snacks?
ACKERLEY: I can't read when I'm hungry!
AVA: ...Well, let's go!
ACKERLEY: Wait up! This pack is heavy...
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