While this section has remained fundamentally the same through the drafts, the actual specifics both of the action and dialogue have changed a lot. Action sequences are hard!
Ava: Time to wrap this up!
Ava: I might not be the fastest...
Ava: ...but good luck out-maneuvering a bat!
Raiona: Heh, I thought I was out here saving you.
Raiona: Should've known you'd find a way out yourself.
Raiona: That's my Ava.
Ava: I'm sorry, I know it was risky! I should have listened to you.
Raiona: Uh, guys... Let's not hang around...
Ava: Yeah, let's go.
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